Changing the Alone title

After posting my first attempt of my teaser trailer on facebook I got some feedback saying that they thought the alone was too much like cartoon writing and they preferred the typography at the beginning which was like a typewriter. They suggested changing it to have a house style, so using livetype I used the same font but added a tv flicker effect to work with the horror genre of watching a video that we weren't meant to see, I als added a blue glow to show the flicker off. On the last title, I used a conventional template of placing my companies logo snip productions in the bottom, adding a website, and saying about the facebook page and the rating information.