Friday, 17 February 2012

Evaluation - Q2

How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?


Click below to see the flickr annotations on both images, they discuss how they compare with the trailer and how I had linked all 3 products.


wITH ADJUSTMENTS
Magazine cover





After final feedback I have made the writing in the yellow bubble less angled so that it is easier to read. I have also made the banner along the bottom smaller and added a plus for more buzz words to attract the audience, the flickr annotations still apply.

After final feedback I deleted some of the writing at the top because along it was well linked to the film it was too much for people to read and the short snappy sentences left will make people remember them and tease them more than before. I also made the masthead slightly bigger. The flickr annotations still apply.

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